My name is Justin
it is a very common name
lots of people have it
but we are not all the same
from Bieber to Timberlake
and so many more
some of us are funny
some are just a bore
some Justins are quiet
some only worth a snore
but some Justins are loud
they can be hard to ignore
then there are Justins that have it together
then for some staying organized is just a chore
some Justins are humble and do not ask for much
but some Justin are greedy and only ask for more
there are Justins who follow the rules
then some are rotten to the core
then there are Justins who only do what is right
and those Justins do it regaurdless of society trying to put them behind a cell door
these are the Justins I thrive to be
though most of these Justins are probably just lore
Nice poem , I like how you name other Justin's
ReplyDeleteI love how you compared yourself to other Justins
ReplyDeleteGood job it was very well said
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the rhyme schemes and comparisons. Awesome
ReplyDeleteGreat poem I like how u compared the Justin's and used other Justin names as fact in your poem.
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DeleteI like you you stated the different personalities in the name Justin. You also mentioned my husband Justin Bieber ;). Nice poem
ReplyDeleteI like how you compared all the Justin's
ReplyDeleteI loved the dr suess-y-ness that it had. A also like how you talked about Bieber and stuff. The comparing and contrasting was nice too
ReplyDeleteI liked your analogies you used & I liked how you compared different Justin's with your name . It was good and well written .
ReplyDeleteI like the rhyme scheme and all the different examples of how Justin's can be like
ReplyDeleteThat rhyming was great. The way you compared yourself to other Justin's in the media made me realize just how popular your name really is. You made a great poem, I loved it.
ReplyDeleteI lke the way you ended your poem the last stanza was really detailed. I also like he you used examples of others and how you thrive to be something more.
ReplyDeleteNice rhyme scheme! Hmmm which Justin are you? I like how you kinda say that no one is the same and your not held back by your name. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you said Justin is a common name and told us the different personalities of them. Very well written (:
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem. It's very well written . Smiley face for you 😄
ReplyDeleteEven though you have a common name you put out there of how different every Justin really is, you seem like a different kind of Justin.. as in a good one. Very nice job working with what you have (:
ReplyDeleteJustin, creative rhymes and excellent rhyme scheme. Keep up the hard work. First time I had a student reference briber and timberlake
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